Posted by Nobodyspecial That was absolutely incredible! Please give us more!
Posted by cris O my god!!!!!! Plz make more! Its super good! I luv it!!
Posted by johnny Hot story...loving it.. kai i think he likes you...
Posted by :P:P nice story plz continue :)
Posted by Alex totally hot man, please continue this story! I blew such a huge load to it haha
Posted by lover You definitely need to continue this...i think this has a really hott potential!!!
Posted by Danny Great story, cant wait to know what happens next (:
Keep it going! ;)
Posted by Yayaya Keep this one coming it's good
Posted by jack beautifully written
Posted by awsomedudeyeah I LOVED it please please continue with the story write more
Posted by Dustin Kieran, this story is so fucking hot, I wanna hear more, I want Eddie, and Kia to get into a relationship and have group sex, or threesomes with TJ, Dan and the team.
Posted by Axle Curtis Wow, I really liked that kieran, it was so fucking hot! But Eddies arse sounds hotter ;)
Please do another!!!
Posted by Nick THANK's a LOT 4 sch a new story line its refrshn nd damn hot nd xcitin nd makes u wnt mre of it.
4 a beginr as u, you got ur thing goin on nd am realy xcitd 4 da nxt instalment nd thse to cum(pun intnded) furthr..
Gr8 job..
Posted by sam GReat story
Posted by jon Good start!
Posted by kenrick The story is hot
Cont plz .. I would love to hear the rest
Posted by erick please don't let kai embarrass eddie let him say he loves him please i love it don't let him be a shamed
Posted by hewlett Nice story. Had me hard and shooting a load. Please cont.
Posted by Smcx Continue it please!!
Posted by Matthew Green I really loved your story. I really hope you continue it.
Posted by Kieran Lee Thankyou so much for all the commets, next chapter should be up soon! :)
Posted by john smith awesome story, really loved it ;0
Posted by alexander I wish i could suck a dick like that big....
Posted by stads i can only dream + fantasize of doing shit likevthat .
Posted by jaaakkee the beginning of tthis story was totally amazing and orgasmic. o: mm. more! :D
Posted by Bennett Dunn liked it. Its cool :-)
Posted by george that was one of the best stories i read
Posted by Joe Loved it. Not to much and got the attitude of the guys right. Next chapter please!
Posted by Louie totally hot i want more write ok hehe :)) keep it up
Posted by Web Cam Hey Kieran, I liked part 1. I can't wait to read the other parts next time I visit the site. Very well written, it sounds like you have a nice little story planned out in your head. Keep up the good work. I'm glad you like my story "Help!" and also my new story. I'll let you know what I think of the other parts as I read them. ;)
Posted by michael i love it XD i want more
Blake put both hands up against the back wall of the stall, and with his legs spread wide apart allowed the
big cocked stud to have his way with him!!!...