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Posted by Ivan
Hey good story man maybe u shud make them pat love justin more n make tyson fall for someone else on da football team. Keep it going man
Posted by Kevyn
wow property? he's like saying your property to him like some slave. But the story is good, keep going :D
Posted by Jiewei
Tyson is a Jerk, find someone else dammit.
Posted by mandy
OMG i loved it you have to write more im dying here. lol I mean it write more!.
Posted by cal
it needs to be longer. its really good but keep it going loads more chapters not just one more.
Posted by jorge calleros
i've been reading this since the begining and i love it you have to keep writing it reminds me of a situation i was in back in high school i really cant wait for your next chapter which i hope isn't the last
Posted by Leo
I Love your stories please keep writeing.
Posted by JM
ooo man, these stories are getting so good. when you write the 6th part can you write a 2 part instead of one.
Posted by thorddust15
dont stop the story please.
Posted by Mitchell
Loved it write the next chapter soon lol I wanna know what happend now
Posted by Seth
hurry up with the next part! these are fantastic :]
Posted by Seth
Also, don't finish them in the next part, these are too good to end just yet.
Posted by Ethan
please dont end it. make the story unfold sum more.tyson, justin,& pat should have a 3sum and pat chooses who he wants more.ur the author, so do what u want, but please dont end it next.
Posted by nickolas
I would try to have justin, pat and sam do a threesome. plz try this plot. i love ur writting!
Posted by Ricky
My God your story makes me speechless as always, great and fantastic job you’ve done here. I really do think it’s a wonderful story, unlike most of the story here which talk more in the sex part yours is totally different, the meaning of friendship, and true love. So please just don’t stop writing yet, there’s so much things to talk about, like what other say about the complication of Justin and Tyson or even problem with both Justin and Pat’s parent about denying them as what they are. Plus if I may say you should put more detail explanation in your story and like what other say you should write longer in each part, and can I ask 4 your e-mail address I would like to talk more…
Posted by jeff
where is the continuation
Posted by jose
wow its really good it was worth the long wait!!! i just hope the next one isnt the last!!!! great job
Posted by Craig
omg please go on writing.. i love this
Posted by Michael
Great story I am sad you are going to be ending it as it has a great start
Posted by Romeo
I think you should keep writing. This could turn into a great book.
The others have some good ideas. You should also put issues between Justin and the football since he's the team captain but there's nothing anyone can do since he's a great captain.
Justin seems to be Pat physical strength, now do some writing where's Pat is Justin emotional strength. This way their bond can grow more stronger.
Don't stop writing, this is one the few writings I saw on this cite!
Posted by jeff
where is the next part???
Posted by diego montera
Great saga so far but this ones a little short. Ull hav to make up for it in the next one especially if its going to be your last
Posted by Bob
dude seriously HURRY UP ALREADY im dying waiting for th e next part
Posted by Brian K
"author note" :
SORRY! i'm not that fast alright.. new chapter is still in progress but i guess i'll be done tomorrow. so just wait 2 or 3 more days and it will be online
Posted by Josh
This is AMAZING MAN!! dont stop at all...
make a book and i'll damn buy it :P
lol...i completely get into the story...its so good!!!
plz dont stop!! eagerly awaiting the 6th part!!!
Posted by terry
Man this is probably the best one yet, it's not like the others. Yea there's the sex which is always great but this has so much more to it. It really brings out more than sexual emotions in the reader. Keep going please, u are awesome at this
Posted by Samuel
K seriously luv wut u did 2 justin u gotta keep writing and writing faster too! ur way 2 talented 2 stop this story short. It wont do the story of these 2 any justice keep writing!
Posted by Gabriel
Dude seriously you need to make this into a book or several books for that matterit could rival the sagas writin by j.k. rowling, j.r.r. tolkin, stephanie meyer, c.j. lewis, anne rice, and steven king. Each of these masterminds had an uncanny ability to capture thier readers with thier works and fill thier imagination with what the plot and characters and settings would look like. Your writing is excellant. Its mind boggling better then the other stories which just concentrate on sex. Keep on writing and dont kill the story just yet! Make i book and ill buy the first one!
Posted by angel torrez
Bro im not even gay and i gotta hand you your props my bff daniel showed me these stories cuz he thought i might like your writing style since i enjoy reading a good story now and then and he was right i do. He keeps bugging me to keep checking the site since he uses my computer to see this stuff so do me a favor and help me by writing faster! please! It kills me since i cant say no to bff or tell him to quite buggin so a little assistence is apreciated. Your fans are waiting so keep writing! P.s. Daniel says he loves your stories and would die if you stopped writing guess ill be having him over more.
Posted by Jean-Claude Francois Michelle
Aaaaaaaaahhhhhh boy what a refreshing and loving story. Who cares if you misspell a few words the storyline covers it over well. I cant believe you havent posted more chapters of your story it seems like your bread and butter! Hope to catch the new one!
Posted by Tom
Holy shit yo the ending is to dye for
Posted by ALex
ohhh hell no... property? like wtf?
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