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First time love reviews

Posted by Willy
Great story! please continue.
Posted by Mike
This is a really sweet story. Keep on with this story!
Posted by Austin
Can I have the rest
Posted by zack
i really want to hear the rest
Posted by _____
Aww that is cute story continue plz
Posted by Grady Fallen
I thought it was really good. As far as constructive criticism goes, I'm kind of obsessive about punctuation. I think that the dialogue could use some quotation marks. Good story though and looking forward the the second part.
Posted by frenchguy
very well done, sensual, exciting, inviting,...
Posted by Gay lover
Will u plaese plaese plaese wright more to this I loved it and I need to know what happeneds to them PLAESE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Alan Renshaw
WOW that was great and well told , That love thing is so special and when it hits you , you can't do anything BUT fall in love . Loved it please tell us more XXX
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