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Force sex changes my life : Part 3 reviews
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Posted by Philip Carey
This is your best story so far. Good bits of conversation and then descriptions of positions and feelings. I look forward to reading some more.
Posted by Niko
Dude, your stories are not bad at all!!! Your story was fucking amazing, it made me cum so hard (hardest I've cummed in almost a year now I want to say). I shot my load over my head, then the rest landed on my face and my chest! I am spent my friend lol, please, PLEASE, Write more!
Thanx!:)
Posted by larry
The story was erotic and loving yet I thought it was too predictable. I felt it did not necessarily have to end with sex because jan (?) Was emotionally messed up and you could have dealt with that aspect of the relationship and bring the two closer first emotionally. I believe that the love making scene would have the meant much more because it would have had a deeper emotional foundation. The rimming would have psych-emotional as would every aspect0of the sex. As it is it was close to mere casyal sex,albeit jan was quite emotional. $maybe I'$ being to critical but I think the story as it is does not fully explore the desires of the gay person who wants relationship that is spiritually nurtured in a womb of caring before utimately enjoying the massive pleasure of sex. Intertwined with emotional, psychologica and spiritual one-ness. You did not intend what I invision but I think my thoughts would really make your story special. After all that, I still loved your story! I had a physical reaction to you word usage alone, that's good writing.
Posted by rhaf
more, more please. . . .
Please do continue. . . I started to love your stories. I didn't like that much of your first story so i didn't put any comment, maybe because i could find any good emotion to feel. ,somewhat like feeding a meal without flesh, but this third part is the best part. I have found something like. . . Well a kind of special feeling. . . You're a good writer, it is very clear and understandable.
So i guess what am i trying to say is that, it's not the sexual parts only that make a sense of it, it's the emotions that get readers attentions. . . . So please do more and continue.
Posted by titus
i wonder whoose gonna play u in the movie adaptation !
Posted by Bryan
Omg I'm so jealous of you lol I've always wanted a drew but it's so hard for me to find one -.- oh great story btw I look forward to another one soon
Posted by Louie
I love yur story janus i really doo ahaha its soo funny how sum people think yu made it up i really doo wish yu wrote more i felt like yur story was short i read it all in like 30 mins thats short soo yea write more
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