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Posted by Rick

Please don't take this wrong at all.. But you rushed into it way to fast. The story has a GREAT potential, but you just sorta rushed into it and readers dont like that.. Slow things down alot, get into details. Is this story about love? Lust? How did u first meet him? Ect.. Answer the smallest questions. Other than that, you have potential.

Posted by Calvin

I assume that this is a true story...its certainly v. hot, man! Except like Rick said, you need to draw it out more...That kinda got me horny but it wasn't enough to get me off...

Posted by albsexy

MMMMM I hope he realises what happened and wants some more . Good luck wait and see let us know WHEN it does

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Random Nathan's dad and I, Part VII

Every time I thought gay sex couldn’t get any hotter, I was proven wrong. Having Eric suck my dick with his finger up hole while Nathan’s dad held me from behind and teased my nipples with his fingers was beyond any descriptive word in the English dictionary...

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