Asleep. reviews

This.. is just horrible. Short stories like this try too hard.

that happen to me to but instead they said i was there bitch now and that i would do that 1 per week and i am sriaght . i am scared of them i fill that if i sleep with them and other of my friend they will team up and rape me

Umm. Hey, i wouldn't say this was horrible, but it wasn't great. There were a lot of misspelled words and i feel that if you'd have taken your time and maybe proofread and elaborated it could have been better.