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Beginnings, Part VII reviews

Posted by Mason
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Posted by sammy
dude great story you should finish it soon
Posted by Abel
this story is awsome, i want to know what happens next.
Posted by justin
these stories are amazing seriously its probably the best story ever. i think you should never end the series, im so addicted
Posted by Bryn Harding
Really beautiful, deep, emotion filled stories. They have been a pleasure to read. I'd love to read more, but feel that the story is perfect as it is. Real credit to you, there fantastic x
Posted by Lamont
Ok plz hurry and keep going with this story. and plz oh plz i hope that jake and micheal get back together.
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Later I was talking with Kevin and another guy when I saw a guy making his way through the crowd toward us. He was the type guy that drew your attention, with his thick dark hair over a tanned face. Dark almost black eyes, aquiline nose, thin lips that easily smiled when he turned to look at you. I guessed him to be about 6 feet tall and weighed in around 180 or so with a well-built but lean body...

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