Beginnings, Part VII reviews

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dude great story you should finish it soon

this story is awsome, i want to know what happens next.

these stories are amazing seriously its probably the best story ever. i think you should never end the series, im so addicted

Really beautiful, deep, emotion filled stories. They have been a pleasure to read. I'd love to read more, but feel that the story is perfect as it is. Real credit to you, there fantastic x

Ok plz hurry and keep going with this story. and plz oh plz i hope that jake and micheal get back together.