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Posted by david pavlick

this is one of the best written stories i have seen on this site. the characters are well formed and the setting descriptions vivid. the sex descriptions are sensual but not over-written. good, good job. the only criticism is that it is a little long for this venue.

Posted by Paul Belloni

This story is romantic, but it is also fucking hot. The sex is raw and jarring. Good work Mr. Gordon.

Posted by VC

fuck me

Posted by paul

It does feel like you've been there. And it's true you write well -- such a pleasure, to get sensitivity and sensuality and strength and heat all in the same place. Thanks, and keep it UP!

Posted by stewart

wheres the next bit where he fucks the nephew

Posted by mike jabbs

AWESOME! At first i was getting impatient and wanted to stop gabbering and just get to the sex but that would have reduced this to just another easily forgettable, shallow sex-rag instead of the really sexy/very well written tale that spans the 25 year majority of the main character's life. a super hot story of hero worship and cross-generational sex.

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