Dark Secret reviews

WHEN IS THE NXT CHAPTER !?

Nice!

hey guys so im not sure if i should go on with the story i mean whats the point if nobody is interested..

Its really good and detailed. The intro could be better more graphic maybe a better hint to his secret. It doesnt really tell anything or leaving you wondering whats next.

thanks you guys i appreciate it. and the next one should be up any day now

i like ur stories, they are hot