Detention 9 reviews

I have to disagree with Patrick. The scene in the library was new and a breath of fresh air. You seemed to try a different approach and you did it in a good way. Just the thrill of getting caught in a library is hot enough. But throw in Chris and you got yourself a wet dream. Keep Up The Good Work

I really enjoyed this story. You make us wait too long to get this edition. Please don't keep us waiting. This is a good one, like the cliff hanger.

Could a lot of you dumbass pricks stop bitching about having to wait for stories. Detention is the best series on this site but Booker can't just shit out a story in a day. A story of such high calibur like Detention takes time to write. For example, look how long it is taking J.K.Rowling to write the Harry Potter books. Anything good is worth waiting for. You impatient cows.

Another great part. I think it's all good and have no complaints so far. I like Brandon and Chris together.

this is the best set of stories i have ever read and i cvant wait till detention ten keep them coming

i think u should right a book this is great stuff

I agree with Mike, I think you should create a book after you are done writing, which I hope won't be for a while. But, when you are done you can compile all the stories and make one of the best books ever. I would be the first one in line at the book singing in my area.

I like your stories and I find certain parts really funny.