Detention reviews

You repeated too much of the first part at the end for me and left it hanging about afterwards.

OMG this was so hot i cant stop thinkin gthat this type of fantasy can really happen...

I loved this story.I'm with Jack please write more and it would be really cool if u made a second part.

Um, I'm not sure why the story repeats itself. I really doubt that;s the way I submitted it. But, oh well. Thanks for what a lot of you said anyway

This story is great! The details are wonderful! It gives such imagery and I love how they still are insulting to each other as they have sex! This is a great story, very well written!

Great story, the ending was ohhhhhhhh so GREAT!

great job both hands on the keyboard poeple that story was hotttttttttttttttt.

First time I have ever cried in a sex story. This one took me a while to read because It was only in my free time. But I longed to read it when I wasnt. Thanks for such a wonderful story Time for you to write a novel. That would be hott

hilarious, man..

loving every hot second of it,

i would like to make up too

Great erotic story! I like the irony of both boys saying that they hate each other while having hot steamy sex.

This story is so fucking hot man