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Empty Spaces : Chapter Four reviews

Posted by Dejon
love this story
Posted by Abel
omg i cant wait for the nex part this stories are so good.
Posted by Jake
hey i was wondering wen u r going to be done with the next part ??????????????
Posted by nektarios
WOW u have such a way w words its amazing ur stories are my favorite keep it up n please hurry i check everyday 4 the next part!
Posted by Daniel
Dasng this story is awesome cant wait till the next part comes. keep writing your really good.
Posted by Brandon
OMG!! I cant believe that someone who feels and loves as much as yourself can have such bad luck with the people and over all life [eg ur social life ] ur such a talented writer and just full of emotion I hope everything works out for you in the end and cant w8 for the next expansion lol ive been a fan since u started and you are still a favourite writer of mine good luck =]
Posted by Jankyn
Wow! Running 2 stories parallel and then merging them together is a notoriously difficult thing 2 do.well-done. I wnt 2 c serious revenge against kyle tho. That cn nt go unpanished.
Posted by Lamont
Ok it would be really nice if u could give us the next part of the story! Im very excited to see how the two work things out! plz hurry with the next part!
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I had broken his will and he obeyed almost immediately. He put his hands in front of his dick but couldn’t hide his erection. I saw fear in his eyes and if there is anything that turns me on, it is fear. This guy was afraid of what would be next, and he better be: he didn’t know yet what I had in store for him...

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