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Author: Brad Hollister

Posted by Dejon

love this story

Posted by Abel

omg i cant wait for the nex part this stories are so good.

Posted by Jake

hey i was wondering wen u r going to be done with the next part ??????????????

Posted by nektarios

WOW u have such a way w words its amazing ur stories are my favorite keep it up n please hurry i check everyday 4 the next part!

Posted by Daniel

Dasng this story is awesome cant wait till the next part comes. keep writing your really good.

Posted by Brandon

OMG!! I cant believe that someone who feels and loves as much as yourself can have such bad luck with the people and over all life [eg ur social life ] ur such a talented writer and just full of emotion I hope everything works out for you in the end and cant w8 for the next expansion lol ive been a fan since u started and you are still a favourite writer of mine good luck =]

Posted by Jankyn

Wow! Running 2 stories parallel and then merging them together is a notoriously difficult thing 2 do.well-done. I wnt 2 c serious revenge against kyle tho. That cn nt go unpanished.

Posted by Lamont

Ok it would be really nice if u could give us the next part of the story! Im very excited to see how the two work things out! plz hurry with the next part!

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“Just set here at the bus stop and a fag would come by and ask if you wanted to take a ride. Then you will hop in the car. The fag will want to ‘feel you up’, and you will say, ‘If you want my cock, you will have to pay for it.’ He will drive you to a quiet spot and blow you. The usual price was about $20.00. He will drop you off here again and then you can go have a good time.” Jack told me.

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