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Author: Shane S

Posted by Trigger

I say definitely continue dude. You have a good, sweet and cute story. I really like the akward tension between the two. "So." "yea, so." Everybody can definitely relate to it though. Maybe seperate the quotes though, so you can track what Kyle and Brian are saying easier.

Posted by niv98

Please do continue... this left me really wanting for more. It's cute, light, and very intriguing. Wish I could read the next chapter soon.

Posted by mike

Wow! that was excellent. Like others have said, please please write more. So looking forward to seeing how this develops! Thank you.

Posted by Bradley

Yea u should continue this sound like a good story would love to kno what happens next

Posted by chris

love it keep it going love storys like this so plz keep it going

Posted by ice

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Posted by ice

love it keep it going love storys like this so plz keep it going i am thailand

Posted by Nick

wow, this is good ^.^ it reminds me of an experience i once had :D i would like to see it finished

Posted by jack

o.O omg please finish the story!

Posted by john smith

good storie, u should finish

Posted by Ken

This is a great story, very well written and with a lot of emotion. Please dn't stop writing it.

Posted by Sameer

Continue the story. I eagerly waiting to read it

Posted by Brian

the story is really worth reading!

Posted by andrew lawson

this story is amazing and i would love to read the next part

Posted by Dusk Himself

this is a great story, better than most on here, i look foward to reading more

Posted by Bry

Can you just please finish it? I need the rest of the story.

Posted by steve

you are more then on the right track. Keep it coming

Posted by Max

I think it was wonderful!!!! I would realy realy love to hear the rest!

Posted by Nick

Its amazing. Dont stop. Im a sucker for happy endings.

Posted by tina

and and .....this is my favorite....ima boy from a small town! lol the rest is a must!

Posted by Henry

Please finish this story,it's extremely good,please write more.

Posted by Brandon

Hell yer dude ur on da right track ceep writing and please finish da story u sound so interesting

Posted by Tom

Omg ur so fukin AUSUM fuk kyle il have u any day!! so keep writin i want da fin

Posted by Adam

I really enjoyed reading the story. would definately love to see this love story finished :D

Posted by louis craven

i think you should write the finish to the story...

Posted by Gabe m

Finish the story

Posted by kayson

it was good

Posted by bret

please finish! its so cute!

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