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Posted by jay

Amazing hurry up with part two :-D

Posted by alejandro

That was so good!!!! Really looking forward to seeing Part 2!! I really want to read it now!!!! The ending left me hooked!

Posted by orion

great , amazing story, cant ardly wait for the next part, i hope you continue soon.

Posted by Dakman

Keep it up this is good shit!!!

Posted by john

When will part 2 cum out?

Posted by Charles

Loved it :D When is part two comming?

Posted by Daniel

That was amazing ^_^ part 2 please xx

Posted by austin

hurry up and write it !! it lol im failing in love with john

Posted by eal

hey david when is part 2 going to come out dont leave us hanging hurry please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! we can't wait

Posted by dds

Are you finishing this???

Posted by J-dog

great story, when is part 2 coming out?

Posted by John

Still looking forward to part two can't wait

Posted by Mitch

Part 2? You reallyneed to update soon!!!!! Your killing use with the anticipation!!!!!!!!

Posted by John

You need to continue this!! You are killing me I want to know what happens

Posted by CARLOS

OMG CAN YOU PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY. TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH, I HATE READING BUT LOVE READING YOUR STORIES! SO CAN YOU PLEASE FINISH THIS ONE..

Posted by Justin

P.S. I don't fuckin care about it grammar just finish it PLEASE

Posted by David Bula

Ok guy i know i havent written for a while some stuff came up in my life that i had to deal with. In good news part 2 is under review but it's taking it's time to become public. I just want to apologize for the shortness of part 2 but there will be more to come. Check "Undead Love" and tell me which one i should continue.

Posted by ryn

What?! Coming soon?! Start writing right now! Just... Ditch everything and start to write!

Posted by Michael Moffatt

Great story so far but the missing punctuation tends to break the reader's flow and sometimes doesn't make sense. I had to continually go back and re-read sentences. Also you grossly overuse the word "just".

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It's 1906, and both Alexander and Zoltan are drafted from the Hofburg to accompany an imperial party to the notorious Klessheim palace. Once there they enjoy its bearly hidden, though stictly forbidden, gay ambience. (If you prefer spunk-only stories, skip to part two)...

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