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Help! - Part 2 reviews

Posted by JJ
Hey its really goood but could you make the story longer because u r at the climak and BOOM its over. U got a good skill thats how stories are supposed to be written.
Posted by Pat
Great story so far, I hope they at least remain friends.
Posted by Daniel
Nice story , when will there be more ?
Posted by nick
Hi.Your story really did touch me.I do wonder,in this sometimes crazy world,why sex is so confuseing to people.We all do have a brain,and we all do have our own hopes,and plans,and dreams.If this story is true my heart DOES go out to you.
Posted by Fer
I really like this story, you really are good writer. I do hope the third part will come out soon.
Posted by russ
You are an impressive writer.
Posted by Fjona
i really like your stories c:
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