Help! - Part 2 reviews

Hey its really goood but could you make the story longer because u r at the climak and BOOM its over. U got a good skill thats how stories are supposed to be written.

Great story so far, I hope they at least remain friends.

Nice story , when will there be more ?

Hi.Your story really did touch me.I do wonder,in this sometimes crazy world,why sex is so confuseing to people.We all do have a brain,and we all do have our own hopes,and plans,and dreams.If this story is true my heart DOES go out to you.

I really like this story, you really are good writer. I do hope the third part will come out soon.

You are an impressive writer.

i really like your stories c: