Indistinction : Part 1 reviews

i could feel that kiss lol, keep it up!

Wow its an amazng story. Wud certainly like an encounter similar bt wit out da violence lol. Ur nt such a bad writer after all tho.

Lol, "not a good writer" are you kidding? It's a great story. You manage to convince the reader to feel the same way you do about Josh which allows them to build an understanding of your character. It's very cleverly written.

wow, your description of that kiss is amazing