Jake & Eric's Excellent Adventure reviews

great! =D

This story made me sad, happy, mad, sad again, then smile when I read the last paragraph. You are a tease seymour, you bastard! Nice story anyway. Can't wait for pt. 2

Man you have to continue with this story. This is a cool story or I should say hot. Waiting for the next one.

That was really touching, made me cry.... felt like one of my experiences, in a way, as i dont have a happy ending.

very nice, well done... its light simple but stunningly great.

Wow. Never in my years of reading erotic stories, had a story been so touching it made a residue of liquid form on my bottom eyelid. Wow. What a passionate writer.