Lost in transfer reviews

Damn that was a hot story. This would make a nice adventures of, type story. It is also well written.

It is very horny read, no doubt. But the plot is very implausible. But I don't think you were going for plausibility, were you? I also appreciate how much you seem to know about the navy and marines...are you in the service or something?

Well written and fast moving. This could use a bit more discriptive addition to physical and action areas. Thank you, tod keeney

Hot story, not plausible but hot. It kept me at full attention and dripping pe cum. I would have to agree marines love fucking navy ass. I wish i could get more.

Your story was interesting.I wonder if you would ever let me fuck you?I would like you on top,while I play with your dick.I have allways enjoyed that with another guys.

I feel bad for that guy

Hot story.