Love In The Firehouse reviews

This strikes me as a more x rated version of Mikey's story on here under much the same title a this

Although the story has a good point, and good storyline, the content is lacking, and the fact that the points of view taken in the story switch so often it becomes confusing. Needs a lot of work to become a solid story, or even an entertaining story. Just by saying TBC doesn't mean we are going to want to read the rest of it. You got us excited, now finish the story. Your lack of an idea shouldn't spare us the erotic ending that belongs!

I'd like to have a friend who care for me.

Really like the story..!