Lovers at last : Part 1 reviews

i really enjoyed that cant wait to see this story unfold

I found this so random, it was no introduction to whatever lies ahead, it didnt introduce any theme or conflict and or much character information...I sure hope the next one picks up!

wow an0ther story who wants to get a higher rate. . . . Please do c0ntinue, i'm excite for this an0ther story after i read the 'Help!'. . . . . Keep going web cam! You can do it,

That was interesting hopefully the next part will be great can't wait to read it