Moon Story: Part 1 reviews

Okay i love the whole werewolves thing i must admit, but nevertheless you still have another story to finish, if you were to do this and undead love at the same time it would be great because, i mean you cant just leave that story like you did i was on the edge of my seat and the whole vamp thing is so hot and-just finish that one first, or do it at the same time

This is an amazing story!

awww Noo! Why end it there??? I hate it when it gets to the good parts and people end it... Anyways Very good story!

OMG I LOVE IT!!! SO UNIQUE!!

This is like a bajilion times better then the vampire crap, an yay he isnt a twink and has a regular body. Umm Team Daniel!!!

I love this story but this story is all too familiar. Damsel in distress gets saved by heroic knight in shiny armor. Please, make the protagonist strong enough to at least fight his small battles without always calling for help or being a cry baby. This would make his relationship with Sean a perfect, evenly matched fit instead of a Walt Disney fairy tale.

Please continue this! I usually dont enjoy Sci-fi stories but this one is actually really good. So please continue!

Awesome story cant wait till part 2