My Blue Eyes Passion : Part 1 reviews

omg thats great can't wait to find the next installment

good story

Can't wait for the next part. This is really good so far.

This story waz great! It waz so intresting and it got me hard untill tha part abotu the accident. Pleaz write more

Jake! Good job, and don't listen to Seymore. All he can do is write stories about coming out...NOTHING ELSE...a little diversity for him would be good though!!! Anywayz, good job and I look forward to the next part!

This is great. i love these kinds of stories. write alot more PLEASE.

Why do you guys think it is cool to write a half story with a clif-hanger ending. The story is good so far, but if you can only write a half story at a time, wait till you're finished before publishing.

i find this close to being a movie . i think that this is a good story . i will waite to read the rest . i hope that you write more on this . i will hold my breath , so dont let me die .

i can't wait for the next one please write another please

i realy enjoyed it and hope you do continuye it it could make a great novel someday if you wish it to be

omg PLEASE write more please i need to know what happens its killing me