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Posted by Bob

don't feel bad for "thinking" that you took a long time!!! Better than the first!!! Please write more!!! Love every second of it!!

Posted by dwc

I love it. Great story!!! and take your time. dont rush it.

Posted by D-Man

Dude This is A Great Story You Really Should Write another Part to this story I Think its awesome and i also think its perfect

Posted by Madeline

Your writing is amazing. The build up and cliff hangers. You are gifted and dont ever think otherwise. Keep writing and remember good stories take time.

Posted by sdvss

why is everyone so hooked on this story. It is SHIT. The grammar, punctuation is out of key. Not to mention the fact that you can't tell who says what because converstaions are running into each other on the same lines. I had to stop after the first paragraph

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After Jim had removed his dick, Pete rolled over and begged Jim to suck him off, and without any hesitation, he dropped his mouth onto Pete's straining member and in only seconds Pete shot his cum into Jim's hot mouth!...

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