My Blue Eyes Passion [Part 4] reviews

I think that the major bad thing from this story is the whole dialogue of the characters. When one person says something, another line should be used below for the next person to speak. It reads more clearly that way. I find it far less confusing.

im crying like a baby right now i knew he would die but didnt want it to happen PLEASE tell me he finds someone els if so please contact me

I wanna be angry and say that reading it was a waste of time and that I hated it but I didn't. It was such a fabulous story and, despite the dialogue, it was well-written with description and wording. It had great emotion even if I feel like I need to crawl in bed and cry for an hour now. I knew it would come and I felt like it would but something inside me just didn't expect you to break my heart like that. It was a great read though. Thank you so much for writing this.

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