My Sister's X-boyfriend, Greg, Part II reviews

great story. i'm waiting for the next chapter.

Great Story I really enjoyed it keep up the good work mand. I hope to hear more about it and what happens when he tells his parents and sister as well what happens after Graduation hopefully your mind will work overtime and you can create another amazing chapter to add to this one. Again I say this story was awesome Keep up the GREAT Job!!!

A few criticsms - the dialogue is often contrived and unrealistic - the adjective "manly" is well over-used - however the story on the whole is hot and sensual and I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Hi.I am glad for you that you found each other.You sound really happy toghether,to me.Take care

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