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Author: dylan

Posted by Alex Harrison

please !!!!!!continue

Posted by Glen

OMG!!!!! This is such a hot story! You HAVE to continue!!!!

Posted by Jay Benson

I would like your story more - If I could understand it! The English is very bad at best and the spelling is horrid!

Posted by Gayturnons

Really? House of night? Might be better if you correctly spelled things and added info in a way that flows... And get the info right! The vampires don't just say "oh let's change someone today" there are trackers and Nyx tells them who to mark... could be so much better with little effort

Posted by lover

Omf I LOVED it pitty no fangs but brillant!!!!

Posted by caleb

This story was based on zoey and starks relationship in the house of night series just switched into a gay role with different characters.

Posted by steve

Wow wow wow!!!!!! That is soooo sexy! Wow!!!! Please do more

Posted by Morpheus Banderra

really good story, but you copied from the housd of night series by p.c and kirsten cast

Posted by morpheus banderra

i have to agree with some of the comments. your background is unorigional, your spelling is mortifying and your grammar rediculously low. if you work on those points you could have a good story

Posted by Andrew Crump

Awesome story can't wait for the others

Posted by John Royle

Great story, can't wait to read more. Wish it was real!!!!

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In part two, Ray finds himself doing much more stuff for his master Jeff. Raunchy stuff. He finds himself eating Jeff's ass out while the man is fucking a woman's pussy, then helps him out in the shower, then makes a great footstool/licker for him. End of the night, he gets his reward, having been such a great bitch...

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