My first fledgling & vampire experience of lust reviews

please !!!!!!continue

OMG!!!!! This is such a hot story! You HAVE to continue!!!!

I would like your story more - If I could understand it! The English is very bad at best and the spelling is horrid!

Really? House of night? Might be better if you correctly spelled things and added info in a way that flows... And get the info right! The vampires don't just say "oh let's change someone today" there are trackers and Nyx tells them who to mark... could be so much better with little effort

Omf I LOVED it pitty no fangs but brillant!!!!

This story was based on zoey and starks relationship in the house of night series just switched into a gay role with different characters.

Wow wow wow!!!!!! That is soooo sexy! Wow!!!! Please do more

really good story, but you copied from the housd of night series by p.c and kirsten cast

i have to agree with some of the comments. your background is unorigional, your spelling is mortifying and your grammar rediculously low. if you work on those points you could have a good story

Awesome story can't wait for the others

Great story, can't wait to read more. Wish it was real!!!!