My romantic story : Part 6 - final reviews

This story has such a sad ending. It's too bad it ended the way it did. Wish Patrick and Nate had a happier ending, but I can understand how Nate must have felt. Keep writing, I love your work.

What happened with Patrick? Like could you give an afterward to what happened from there on out?

oh god i thought that was the end i was really hanging on a cliff when i saw the -the end- word there hehe great story !! gonna wait for the continuation of the story keep it up XDD

Dont tell anyone but.....the characters in this story are going to make an appearance in the next one...shhhh

Loved the story!!! Just didn't like the way you ended it, it seems to me that Nate saved two lives that day at the mall. Just saying.