One Love: Part One reviews

continue it.i expect it to be a love story

Yes please continue, I'm dying to know what's Gonna Happen!!!!!

I enjoyed this immensely, and I hope that you continue this. I look forward to the next update and new story from you.

Okay good so far Dylan needs to get his ass beat and Chris and the doctor should start dating.

Pls continue!!!!

Excellent story really enjoyed it, very good description of the rape scene, cant wait for the next instalment.

this story is great, i love it your doing great, if you dont mind, i suggest perhaps police involvement in the next part, or him seeing dylan again. good job