Parking Lot - Part One: Working the Graveyard reviews

good start to a promising story, looking forward to part 2. hot bj action

thank you, jack. i'm glad you liked part 1. i took a small vacation over memorial day weekend, but i'm working on part 2 now.

Very well written, with an explosive vocabulary. I actually felt everything the characters felt, saw, tasted, and with every sensory ability I posess. The characters were as real as you and I. I related to and with the men in the story and can't wait to be entwined in the fantasy world of sex, cock worship, and unbridaled man worship. Thank you for the pleasure of allowing me to read a well piece of erotic fiction and hope to definitely read more from you in the future. Thank you again.