Pool reviews

Excellent! Very hot. Thank you very much. Would love to hear what happened when Lance did move in. Super writing.

AWESOME STORY! Please say there is more to this!!!!

This is at once the best written and most mature adult story I've every read. Though my own fantasies are not projected in it, I am completely absorbed by every delicious turn of phrase, swept away, and aroused far more than I thought text could achieve. Thank you for writing this, and please continue.

I have to agree with all of the responses above. This story is truly awesome and sensuous beyond belief. I hope there is more to this story as I would like to read more. Thank you.

I loved your story compleatly I hope you write more does Lance move in and do they actually commit to each other to be only with each other and does true love bind these two together

Wow, this story is really good, i mean, its so so true, and its written very good! Just great! Wish to know what happen when lance moved in. . . .

Wow that was one sexy story It gave me a hard on a couple of times thanks . Thank you keep them cumming ha ha