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Posted by Roma

Best story I've ever read. Got me so emotional n felt like I was in it.... Good work Jason

Posted by Benji

This is STILL and will always be one of my favorite stories EVER! You are simply an amazing writer, i cried thru more than most of this haha time to read the next chapters of this...THANK YOU!!

Posted by andrew gollins

Good story overall, but I think there is some confusion with the Points of View, ie wrong person speaking.

Posted by bluebab

Nice story. i wish i use a bf like Alex...

Posted by Animelover417

That was beautiful nest story I have read on this sit ever I was crying,laughing and dying this has to be the most emotional story ever well online story

Posted by larry

This was a well written story all of chapter made me understand the situation. Alex and Dan were well developed. Their were times it was confusing, but all and all it was a story that was complicated, just as real life

Posted by harry Jenkins

ive never left a reply for any story i have read on here, but this had everything in it and had me on the edge of my seat i couldnt stop reading. i think you done an amazing job writing this and i would really love to see more like this

Posted by Donald

This was an amazing story!!!

Posted by Tyler

Wow incredible story, you really do tell an amazing story

Posted by Martin Blois

I just love this story, please write more about these two characters. I know what they look like. In my mind. Alex and Dan forever. I am glad they left with each other. Brilliant story. Gripping to the end. I have book mark it.

Posted by Jim

Wow very well written kept me very intrigued and made me finish the story I hope you write a sequel to this

Posted by Bob

This story is so brilliant, it made me cry and overwhelmed me with every single type of emotion. Truely amazing. Thank you so much.

Posted by chuck hubele

I to have never written anything about a story ive read but i must say this grabbed from the start until the end. I had to explain to my roommate why i had tears in my eyes.Loved it Keep writing

Posted by Nick

Best story ever made me fucking cry you bastard .will defemyly read again.

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