Show me were the toilet is! reviews

This story has too much to be added holes of information that need to be filled to complete it.

There's just not enough detail to allow me to get horny over this story. As soon as any new plot detail is added, it's quickly dealt with and passed over. The premise of the story is good, but it needs to be fleshed out a lot more to take this from a basic synopsis to a story.

Fuck ol.. The way u ve written it one would guess u re in primary school.