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Soldier's Story: Chapter 4 reviews

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Posted by Nikki Kane

oh my goodness! That was intense! Cant wait for the next one!

Posted by Nick

Although I'm a big fan of this story, I'm not too biG to the new 1st person perspective for each character, I felt the natural course you took with chapter 1-3 was exceptional, but you. Drifted far off from your natural course, the scene with adrian at the shooting range was way from the protagonist nature, but I guessed that was on purpose XD, please don't drift too far and keep up the gOOD WORK! 3

Posted by Denys

Another great story...keep writing, mate!!!

Posted by sdmofo777

please make the next one soon please!

Posted by Chris

You're the greatest writer ever. I can't stop reading your story. Never stop writing.

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