Straight no more. reviews

Love it

holy fucking shit!! whoever wrote this is a genious!!!

Great story. Good rhythym. Kept it real. Thanks

Best story i've read in a while. I was getting sick of those people who don't know how to spell correctly. Wow. That's all I have to say.

That was defihitely hot. You had me going. please write more.

ah man so hot...just shot my load thanks

that was hott

Good story, but how did they go from a pool chair to a bed???

It was a really good story, but I just didn't like how it was written. Their we're grammical errors and different things that made it hard to read.