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Posted by ILUVBSBEB
Good start, although the description could be more graphic
Posted by david
AWESOME!!..man, that was the most erotic gay story that i have ever heard..too bad it was completely fictional though..very very graphic and i would love to read a part 2..thanx guys
Posted by Paulette
Im a serious Michael Booker fan so i reconized the similarites of the stories right off the plate. Im like Lisa im not saying u did it on purpose just make sure it DOES take a turn in the next story. Work on the dialouge. Im looking foward to the next one though.
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Random Jack and Kyle - Part 5

Jack slid his hand into Kyle’s hair and pulled him closer. Kyle touched Jack’s lips with the tip of his tongue and Jack parted his lips obediently, letting Kyle’s tongue slide into his mouth. Jack was hard now too and he knew Kyle wanted this badly too, he could tell from the way he kissed him passionately and from the way his hands were clutching at his waist...

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