The Football Team Captian reviews

Omg u rlly need to write a sequel I want to see what happens next love ur story 3

that was so hot! make another one please

Keep going. this is good.

very hot! please right a next chapter

Great start, ready for the next installment.

I enjoyed it. I'm curious to see what will happen next. Altbough I'm bi, I definitely hope this story has a gay outcome. Nice job mate.

i think its great story. Loved both male and female make-out. Real great

Can't wait for the next one. this was awesome dude

This story is doing everything that u wud expect so... PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ HURRY WITH CHAP. 2!!!!!!!!

Ryan...that was a great story ...had lots of interseting elements....the chemistry /heat between the 2 main characters was so intense ...unsure who I related to more,Ryan or Eric...sure would like this story to continue ...it sure stirred my chemistry

good story, i enjoy all the detail, you dont need to change anything. it got me going and i just wanted to read more and more. i would like you to get in contact with me at some time. thanks again.

You gonna write more bout this story cos wanna know what happens next?