The Jock and the Prep reviews

The story had a good thought behind it, but you seemed rushed. It could be a great story if you had taken the time to describe each thing more in detail. I understand it's a short story, and that's the feeling you wanted it to give, but as it stands, the story didn't even get me hard. ._.; Sorry.

it sucked cock, pretty much like all u fags!haha

Yeah, I noticed a lot of gramatical errors, which means you obviously didn't spend much time on this story. I thought this story would be hot, but it didn't get me hard either.

great story got me hard nice and slowly keep up the good work

amazing keep it coming