The Long Mile Shot II reviews

That was a great part two. This is the best story I have ever read on this site. keep up the good work

This is the best story I have ever read on this site, and I'm not lying. The story is cute,sweet and loving all at the same time, but with that needed drama. I also like that the story isn't all sex, and that it's a actually story. So please continue this story is a masterpiece.

I loved how this ended, It was good a little slow but goo i love the back stroy the depth of Jake is amazing.

Really great story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

This was a brilliantly story I loved everything about. But I didn't like the way it ended I hope there is more to this story please let there be more.

This sHit is so good. BuT where is the rest, wow this story is amazing. It is sO nice to read something_anything on thIs site w/ a real plot. I just read this story today and i dOnt know how long it has been on the web, but plEase finish...i dont know what inspires you dude, but whatever it is put it to work on your next story...u r0ck