The Mystic Within Chapter Two reviews

great story so far, can't wait for the next chapter

hehe... its cool... hmmm, lets see... motivation... sex? =P the story is going great.

i love it , it is a pretty amazing story, can't wait to read the next chapter.

i love the story it was amazing would love to read the next chapter

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GOOD STORY SO FAR. I LIKE THAT IT DOESNT START OUT WITH SEX LIKE ALL THE OTHER STORY'S. SO PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THE STORY CAUSE IT SEEMS LIKE A REALLY GOOD STORY.

The story is really cool man love the whole doubt as to whether he's hallucinating or not. So is he gonna be like some mutant or keep hallucinating? And how's he gonna plunge into the gay world?