The Story of David and Matt reviews

i like it but i don't.

that was really really good

this can't come from your head? it's to real like the little sister calling david butter. i cried so hard at the part where she "put her tiny hand over his mouth as if quieting the sound would stop the pain" and "Mommy! butter's hurt" God! you are amazing. I've read all of your stories and I like the fact the their not "sex stories" but how "sex" is just a part of the story.

fantastic, drew a tear. need to find part two right now.

make a part two PLZ it was really good

several parts of this story had me in tears. will there be more?

I spent most of yesterday and today thinking about these characters and their stories. More than once I found myself crying and desperately wanting to remove than burdens and carry them for them! Last night I stared at the ceiling thinking of the characters until I found that I was crying for their broken hearts. I am a straight female with wonderful gay and lesbian friends. Please finish this story. We all want to finish your story. I hope that you write professionally!

its a great story i was really getting into it and i want to read more so why haven't you finished it yet thats what i hate when someone starts a good story and they never finish it so pls do finish it soon

That was really beautiful! I couldnt help but cry!