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The Two of Us reviews

Posted by Mike
This is an ok story - but why did it just stop dead?? It needs to be finished off!!
Posted by Bob
Great story. It so reminds me of my first time which happened with my best friend. Nothing beats recalling your first experience and the high level of excitement you never feel exactly the same way again. Well done, MacDonald.
Posted by Mar-Mar
pretty good. I was had for most of it
Posted by chris
loved it what happen next
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Barbara was leaning back on the couch with her head tilted back so I went around behind it and started kissing her. Meanwhile Vince moved his attention to the other breast and then worked his way down until he was able to pull off her thin pajama bottoms. Then going to his knees on the floor in front of her Vince started to softly lick her pussy, while I kissed her and played with both of her 34C breasts...

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