The most painful yet beautiful experience with a jock! reviews

This is the saddest hottest story ever!! 3 it's definetly my fav!!

You made me cry, but it was good! Plz make more

i like this story best one i have ever read...

Omg!! I cried so hard!! This doesn't need to be on a site like this!!!! You need to write a book!!

oh my god this is the best story i have ever read i didnt want it to end you are in my opinion the best author ever

This story is so good but it makes me want to know more, Harvard isn't that far from NYU and you should definatly continue it

this is a reallly beautiful story. i love it so much

Man this was a touching storie makes me think of who I'll fall in true love with, still lovely an touching storie

WTF?!?!?!?

Love this story so much!!!!!!!! So passionate!!!!! I have to tell you I cried please make a book!!!!!! I love your writting!

hello michael.......i don't geting words to expres me........bat can we be friends..............i love to have u as my friend.......ur friend vinod...it pure..

I love this story I am bisexual and I loved it I cried so much thank you very much you have changed my life I learned to not be ashamed of my sexuality I would really like to talk to you so if you have an email adress please give it to me and I hope you are okay and I think you should date him again

this was a great story since it's actually about love not sex I found myself like Donovan so you must be happy with the memories you could have made things work and still pursued what you wanted to do, perphaps why not rekindle a relationship with him? It seems like you were genuionly in love and it could turn out to be great and also any chance of you telling us where Donovan is? I wouldnt mind getting a checkup from him when he's a doc...lol

You should todally go after him after youve achived your goals! The best thing about love is it can wait. I still get teary when i think of this story. i made two of my friends read it and they cried too! more! it made me realise what true love is!

that was the best story i have ever read!

wow that was a really good story :D

Nooooooooooo!! Whyyyyyyyyyy?! Nooooooooooooooooooooo!! Oh my gooosssshhhh!! I hate the ending!! It makes me sooo sad im ballin.. GREAT STORY THOUGH!! i absolutely love it!

liked ya brainz!!! sure 4 dat u aint happy wid ur life ...cool sty dreamer ...

Can I add u on facebook?

Omg I love this story it made me cry soo much I'm deciding if I'm straight or gay right now and I just love this story I tear up every time I think about it you have to make more please.

That was the most beautiful story i read so far. that sex scene had me ready to blow a load [lol] i wish i could find someone like Donovon!

Brilliant story-telling, just a pity it had 2 end so sad.

Donovan shouldve fight for his love to michael.. I hate tragic stories..but i love this,but still wants this to be a happy ending!

is this real? goodness, u're great. want to read another story from u. gosh, u're like nicholas sparks

Oh my god! This is just awesome, I love your guys' feedback it's greatly appreciated 3 I'd love to share more but I can't, really, I haven't seen him, and sorry it ended sadly but thats just life. However moreover I am working on the story of our prom night because that was another passionate day for us. I hope you'll like it.

Love the story

How fucking sad. I'm in TEARS!!

hey, wow, really amazing story, short though. Would really recommend the story and details to be lengthened. I love this story. I'm straight, but might see guys in a different way after reading this. Really expecting to read more.

Dude this story is fricking awesome!! When I read it I totally convince that this is a real story even u stayed earlier it's totally fantasy. I love to ask u to write the sequel of this story n love to know u even more.. Nice story and good job

This happened to me last year and I haven't gotten over it...I live in Alaska and my bf moved to Maine to attend college. We broke up but after reading this story, I called him and told him I am moving to Augusta with him. I hope that gives u guys some clear of conscience

Really touching. It made me cry.

It's a beautiful story and it made me cry.

Omg this story is so sweet....i wish it was like this for me but as the years go by i havent found a love close to this, i know am just 19 my life is yet to start but i've been single for almost 2 years know...i really wished both you would have work out something

it would be nice if you can get donovan to do his side of the story 3... i want to know what he was thinking the first time he saw you. really hoped things would be different so both of you could still be together...but i guess the moral of the story is its better to love than to never loved at all

You should make a second part to this where they find each kther again!!!!pleaseee pleasee pleaseee

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Have you gotten in contact with donavan? That was the cuttest story ever and I started crying reading it

a perfect ending story

That was amazing! i played Secondhand Serenade - Fall For You from the car part to the end! im crying.. Thank you

I loved it! Such romantic genuine love! 3

It has been Painfully slow getting to part 2..and You really should get someone to CORRECT your Spelling...For an aspiring writer..You should be ashamed !!!!

i luv ur story

Perfect

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I truly love this story, for reali

Good story,hope it wasn't all fiction! Lol who says being a nerd can't be fun? You're not from southern Indiana are you??

This story was so beautiful, I could picture everyone in my imagination, you made me cry, laugh, jump out of joy when you guys kissed. Please keep writing more.