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Undead Love : Part 1 reviews

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Author: David Bula

Posted by Koua

Please continue football love! Your fans have been waiting for almost 3 months for part 2

Posted by Sean

Finish the Football love story!

Posted by Ray

I think you should continue both, haha, But if I had to choose I would choose Football Love. I've been dying to find out what happens!

Posted by Eric

Argh...! I just love the way you write, it's quite energized and there is no ill placed word, but I say go full force on football love and let this one simmer in the back burner because this style can get rather reductive and it would be a shame if it was forced and became a cliche piece. Anyways, yay you're back!

Posted by Justin

While both are really great I love football love and want u to please continue football love

Posted by Sam parks

You NEED to finish this first!!! I luv fantasy sex stories!! I want u to finish!! PLEASE! This totally takes my manliness but oh well!!

Posted by RG

Both, please? :D

Posted by Ravi

We love all ur stories mate ... Better continue with football love as we have waited for it so we can wait for this some days.... Pls don't make us wait for too long if you like continue both we all will love it

Posted by Mitch

FOOTBALL LOVE!!! I've been waiting for that one for 3 months now!

Posted by Erocis

I say BOTH! I can't decide which one I like more!

Posted by eal

Football love please!!!!!!!!!

Posted by Josh

Football love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by Alejandro

But Undead Love also sounds really good! Can you please continue both? :D

Posted by DillonS

By far the best story on this website! I first fell in love with "The Bank", then I read "Soilder Story" and couldn't stop reading. But this story is by far the BESt! Love love love Your such a good writer! I'm Team Andrew!!!

Posted by marcuz

football

Posted by *******

Keep writing on this series I cant wait to read it!

Posted by Yellen257

Football Love and may i just say that i truly enjoy reading your stories. You bring such great emotional depth to your characters that you feel an attachment to each one they almost feel alive. please don't stop writing.

Posted by Ean

U should continue this one LOL. Its very interesting

Posted by David

Football Love. PLEASE!

Posted by seduca

This one definatly!!!

Posted by aaron mcd

football love

Posted by Alex

Football love its really good and hot and sexy

Posted by David

This one please!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by kevin

FOOTBALL LOVE!!!!! YU R MY INSPIRATION TO KEEP GOING .....

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