Unlikely reviews

Wow that was an amazing story I actually took the liberity of reading can't wait to see what you have next!!!

keep going with this one i love the story and the people plz make a part 2

This is just too cute and too honest and too realistic. This is amazing shit and you should keep writing.

I think it was a nice build up. You have a series of characters with some interesting makeups. Keep it going

It looks like a nice move in the makeing

it was great would love for you to keep writing this story line loved it

Keep writing, mate! You're good, very good.

What ive seen on the comments that every buddy love the story....yes it is fantastic and it have it all you are fanny in it you are dramatic you are serious and more important you are talented...However there some spots to refer to like how can colin forget his best friend and he do so much to him and the sex scene between Dave and colin was too soon i gess .., anyway it was amazing i prefer to see colin's father in the next part ....thank u alot and good job

This is one of the best story on this website.

good story you should wright more

It's really good mate. keep writing like this.. you don't have to include more sex in my opinion.you can focus a bit more on the thoughts of the characters in my opinion. well done

omg...that was amazing! PLZ write more!!! lol. It really inspires me to start coming out to some of my friends and if you knew me, you'd know what a huge statement that is lol.

OMg that was so so amazing I loved it and so want more, I love the whole relationship side of it and I think you r really great at this XD

That was bloody brilliant. Nuff' said.

Oh my goodness. Please Please Please continue this story line. It is absolutely amazing. I might have a new favorite story line if it continues.

That story was amazing!! I truly enjoyed reading it... I just wish it was longer!!

I want to know more. What will his mom say? Will his dad possibly return????

Well, I definitely liked it. I would be happy to read something else you have written. And believe me, the fact that you emphasize on the characters makes your story much more pulsating than the other sex stories.

very good u neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed to write more

you have to keep writing please its sooo good =P

Loved it hot as fuck!,

i really enjoyed this story, better than most stuff put up here

That was amazing. I think there was the right amount of sex. So many people spend way to much time with the sex and no time with the story. It was great.

i cried like a little bitch but i loved it best story here yet.

This is the best story I have ever read! PLEASE continue this story! You made it an actual story not just sex... Great job! :D

This is really good. I enjoyed it and hope to read more.

Great story. I hope you add to it.

Great story line. I hope you write some more on this one. I feel like I'm part of the story. WOW. I would give my life to have a lover like that, witch I have never had.

dude keep on writing that was brilliant3

this is an amazing story! I hope to see more!

best story ever!! write more!!

Hooked can't wait for more!!

Amazing story. It brought so many emotions to surface. Very creative! Keep up the good work. Would love to see how this story unfolds...hope there's more to come

nice story man. definitely wanna see a part 2!

great story i love it wanna see the part 2 soon keep it up !!!

This is hands down one of the best and on point gay stories that I've ever read. The romance/sex portion is well-balanced. Keep writing these good stuffs dude! Make sure to add some more steamy part :D

WOW That was great , very well told . Loved it all but the best part was the queer bashers getting some shit , I love that xxx

This might be one of the best stories that I've ever read on this website. I love when there is more story than sex.

It was so.beautiful, im just sad for Jenn having no partner uwu