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When I'm with you: Part 7 reviews

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Posted by Alex

GREAT STORY!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE, LOVE THE CHARACTERS!!! :D

Posted by HaHa

I agree with Miggy!!!! thts my favorite cpl in this series!!!! i hope they get bak together, and i hav a feeling there time in the cottage will be rly rly fun, can't w8!

Posted by Aaron

This is by farr the best series I've ever read!! Please please please continue writing!! I 3 your work!

Posted by Miggy

Yabadabadoo! I hope Kai brings TJ and Tyler in the camping trip they're planning.. And some of their friends as well! YAAAAAAAAAAAAY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART! Whenever I have problems at home I just set that aside and read your stories that makes me at ease.

Posted by David Bula

Dude I not ashamed to say that I like your stories even though I am also am author here... Can't wait for the next part

Posted by Miggy

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!! TJ AND TYLER! WOOF WOOF! LOL! TRYNA MAKE A CHANT!

Posted by Marco

You are very talented. I want more story but I don't like that the characters are mentally ill...

Posted by Miles

Yaaaaaay, just when I thought this was gonna become as confusing as Michael Booker's 'secrets' series Kai returned to normality. Great story, keep them coming

Posted by Miggy

LOL! Agree with Miles. Secrets was so confusing for me! IT ACTUALLY MADE MY HEAD HURT! Totally not a big fan with those 'creepy-imma-change-your-face!' genre.

Posted by Kieran Lee

Sorry Miggy, i'm really busy so it probally won't be finished till next week. :\

Posted by matt

i am so in love with this series

Posted by Miggy

But, still Kieran I keep re-reading chapters 1 to 7 and let me tell you I could never get tired of it!

Posted by seth

well I was the first one with you in the first part and you realy make me wanna cry i cant wate to conect you please keep writing you have it

Posted by Miggy

Kieran I hope you also right another story about a effeminate guy and a very manly man! Hehe, just a suggestion.. Me and my boyfriend are exactly like that! :D

Posted by Shawn

Yet again another great addition to your story. You need to keep writing. I think id die if you stopped!

Posted by David

Yayyy!!! Thankyou kieran for starting part 9!!!! I can't wait to read parts 8-9!!

Posted by Miggy

YABADABADOO! YO GO KIERAN LEE! :D:D:D:D:D:D

Posted by Miggy

A millennium had past.. Still, the website haven't brought up the new stories yet!

Posted by Andy

SOOO fucking weird in the early story, certainly NOT gay porn I couldn't take any more, I couldn't read any more.

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