A story : Part 3 reviews
Watttt!!!! NOoooo way! U need to tell us who he stays with!!!! UGHH!
Sorry guys but the story ends here. I like the idea to make my readers decide the guy David stays with. Personally I think it's andrew but it's up to you really. I'll think about making the last part a bit longer.
I love this story! I do wish that some parts didn't go so fast, but I love it and the obvious choice is Andrew, the first love. But Ryan will be able to bounce back. Maybe they can have a polyamorous relationship? Haha I'll take Ryan if David doesn't though c:
oh god how i like that much of your story,,, if david could take them one at a time. . . Hehe kidding. . . . But it's so sad to end up just like that, it crushes my heart... Wish you will you continue more, i still can't decide which of the. God i love them all. . .but, well, well hard to choose. Please, end it up with who he will cho0se. Anyway, it's the best!
I love ur story. Really do, but did you really have to end it there? I mean c'mon! I would love to find out who David ends up with. To be honest, I hope it's Ryan. But could you plz write the fourth part? Plz?
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Ok so I get the point of an open ending story so that readers can't get mad with what you chose but COME ON MAN!!!!! I can't choose so choose for me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Ryan is d man!! No doubts
BTW. i totally agree with Carlos up there.
Simply Fantastic. You are amazing. I love how you leave it open ended. As I was reading and even now I am still trying to figure out who he stays with. Truly amazing.
Oh my god...i'm crying...this story is so great...oh my god...i'm still crying now,sniff...
is it andrew i was put in this same spot 4 years ago
i know what David is going threw
ANDREW ALL THE WAY!! 3
Omg noooo please finish the story i need it i want it please please please i cried and i wanna know who he gets with
oh nice i dont know who i would have choosed
I would pray to have a lover like Andrew or Ryan but not both of them....its worse then hell to choose...its so hard but I think Dvid will choose Andrew...well i think they both grew up together in a sense in college and i feel they share a deep bond...
I hate open ended stories!!!!! Parts one and two were great but the end of part three makes me mad!!!!
oh i forgot andrew is the one for david 33
I love it g00d j0b david thanks again for a simply remarkable story love always your fan jonah
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