1st time love twice reviews

Please don't take this wrong at all.. But you rushed into it way to fast. The story has a GREAT potential, but you just sorta rushed into it and readers dont like that.. Slow things down alot, get into details. Is this story about love? Lust? How did u first meet him? Ect.. Answer the smallest questions. Other than that, you have potential.

I assume that this is a true story...its certainly v. hot, man! Except like Rick said, you need to draw it out more...That kinda got me horny but it wasn't enough to get me off...

MMMMM I hope he realises what happened and wants some more . Good luck wait and see let us know WHEN it does