Posted by jonjr that was a cute story.
Posted by jeff very goooood store i just love it cant wate til you write some more
Posted by Ken That was an excellent story. I'll be looking forward to the next installment. Good writing.
Posted by Athan I loved this piece! The detail, the passion. I really liked that you didn't dwell too much on any specific time, that you let it just flow naturaly. Very well done, If there's more to read I look forward to seeing it.
Posted by Loyd Very good go on with it.
Posted by Corey That's a cute story, very sweet. I hope you continue sometime :)
Posted by Anon Wow! It's almost like you described my first love. Well done!
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Posted by Chico That was a very moving story. You are some piece of work Seymour. I can always count on you to make me recall some moments of my younger years that would stayed forgotten if it weren't for you and your stories. AAAAAAAAA- (only because of spelling errors)
Posted by Pat What a fantastic story. You can picture yourself in the story. I loved it!
Posted by Max Awww. sweet story
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Posted by Jerry Great story! - Touching
Posted by albsexy WOW that was so sexy mmmmm that is MY DREAM mmmmm I haope there is a follow on thanks well told (from the heart)
A boy named Blake goes on a camping trip with his buddies from school. When they run out of gas in a strange town, they find theres more to this place then its abandoned state. Blake and his friends are taken by the inhabinants and repeatedly raped and molested. Can Blake escape before he loses something other than his mind, like his virginity?