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A Turn of Events - Part One reviews
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Posted by mk
what a load of boring shit
Posted by Art
I'm sorry but I don't get it.
What's with this 'back to present'? When were you in the pass?
I think the story started well but you didn't make it clear enough and you rushed it to much in the end. If you've got time, start again. Make it clear when your doing a flash back. I would like to know a litte more as to how old they both are, what happened to both there parents and if either of them knew they where gay for before this encounter. Just slow it down and you will have a really good story.
Let us get to know who your writing about and let us enjoy there first time together.
Posted by Lee1746
where will u take trvas an carl, will they become lovers or will that turn agenst each other?
story is goos so far
Posted by Loyd
Bad to stop there.
Posted by Mike
Totally rubbish story!! Lacked any direction or purpose. Get real man, if you're going to write a story at least follow the basic structures of grammar to give the story a chance!!
Posted by Loyd
please finish
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