Posted by Mike A pretty hot story which was ruined to an extent by the immature style of writing. Let's see what happens next ...
Posted by Mike D I liked the story - but yes, a bit more detail would help. Looking forward to the next part.
Posted by Ken I'll be waiting patiently. Good writing.
Posted by :) holy shit, if only i were ur friend
Posted by horny holy shit, pleasssse right what happens next!!! and soon!!!
Posted by Rendoll Excellent! I cant wait til the next one..
Posted by Kevin that got me off like 6 times lol..great story! I can't wait to read more!
Posted by Allen Hi Jack,
Finally found another of your stories not as good as
My German Lover. Wish you had other stories and would love to read more about your life with Mathiue.
Posted by andrew i wish i was with you. fuck me bich!
Posted by Col Gawd your a fantastic writer, hard from start to finish and I would love to be one of your friends and ride that monster of your ;) lol. Where is part two it can't stop there, what happened next??????
Posted by dave Very hot story!
Posted by Simon Jury hi jack im simon gr8 story man and loved ur previous stories i cried loads at the sad partz and wankd at sexc partz x plz write more?